Intern+Sample+Resumes

Write your comments below! Merci! user:mllegibbs

Okay Gretchen, here is the best of both worlds, I've made comments and uploaded the document as a new file. Take or leave whatever you think is necessary. user:cartierm

Please feel free to give your comments, email Mary user:cartierm

[|Ashleigh's updated Resume] I've updated my resume with your suggested changes - second readings would be great! Thanks for your insights! Comment here or email kingashl@msu.edu user:fraucote1 FYI - I stole verbage from a couple of ppl and other examples, so feel free to steal back!

Ashleigh – I like the format of your resume, it is easy to read and very professional. Is there anyway that your dates on the right hand side could be more uniform? Maybe all show just the years? I would also suggest capitalizing the beginnings of your bullet points, some are and some are not. Good verbs – the only one I would suggest changing would be “co-taught” to something different. Either just say “taught” or change it to “collaborated with other teachers” Hope some of this helps! user:dawnmarie

I tracked the changes I made as suggestions on your. Looks great! user:mllegibbs

Updated Items looking for advice/ suggestions

Here's an example of the Dividers with pictures I had asked about on the discussion for this week. It's a file in Publisher, so let me know if it won't work! Thanks for your advice!



Cover Letter:Please take a look and let me know what you think!

Teaching Philosophy: Coming Soon!

Professional Biography: Coming Soon!

Resume: I've gotten some good feedback on this so far, so Thanks!. Take a look if you want, but I have updated since these drafts and no longer need suggestions here. Take a look at the two I have posted here- Same content but different order. Let me know which one you prefer... Thanks!!!user:leonar77

Hi Bridget – I would suggest putting your education after your professional goal. You might also consider putting your study abroad as a whole other category, something like “immersion experience”. After professional goal and education, I like the order of draft 3. It is easy to read and well aligned. Good job! user:dawnmarie

Bridget- 1.) I think that Field experience needs to go before Professional experience - so draft 3 has a vote from me! 2.) Under professional goal I would indent the second line as well because all of your bullets are indented and it would help to make the whole page more uniform. 3.) I would have all font end before the dates. this may mean you need to tab the dates over one more time or decrease the font size of your bullets, but I think this may make it easier to read. 4.) Finally I would put little dots between your address, phone number and email address. This can be done by going up to insert then select 'symbol' then choose the thick dot. This will help to break up the information since its all on one line, which i do like. Good luck! user:fraucote1

Please feel free to give comments - you can email me here - Thanks so much! user:dawnmarie